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HITLER

There once was a guy named Hitler,
Who moped around looking bitter.
He failed univercity,
Hated jews and divercity.
To him the jews were litter.

His artwork didn't go far,
So he spent his time at the bar.
But he didn't drink beer,
Just sat with a sneer.
Hoping to someday go far.

So he made a group that hated the jews,
They wore black ties and formal shoes.
They blamed the jews for their lack of money,
Made many rude jokes that weren't very funny.

The government leader they planned to kill,
Promising Germany hope and free will.
But Hitler's plans went terribly wrong,
He didn't plan well, his actions weren't strong.

His failed attempt sent him to jail,
Where he wrote a book to tell his tale.
But like his artwork it wasn't well known,
It was hard to read and had a dull tone.

He wasn't in jail for a very long time,
He spent three months repaying his crime.
And when he got out he was ready to fight.
He made killing jews a German's delight.

Of the country he gained control,
He was very convincing in role.
He brainwashed the people, he did it a lot,
But they were unsure of his greater plot.

But when they found out they just kept going,
The hate for the jews, growing and growing.
Life for them became cold and unfair,
Hate, Unhappiness, Disgrace, Dispair

To the camps the jews were sent,
Where they were tortured, hurt with torment.
This was what hitler had always planned out,
He wasn't a nice man, now that was no doubt.

Hitler was the one who began World War Two,
A war of racism between the German and the Jew...
©2006-2009 ~one2many-dolls
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Author's Comments

I wrote this for young children. This was an assignment given to me by my history teacher. We had to chose something thta we had learnt in history that year and put it into a children's book. Ages 8-11. So I decided to write about Hitler. It's a mini Biography for kids. This isn't all of his life though as you can tell. I stopped after he took over, Because i had passed the number of requiered pages. -_-

Hope you like!!

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:iconone2many-dolls:
:blahblah: He he

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I like the rhyming, I must say.

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very good

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lol ... saying that he failed university makes him sound stupid which is terribly wrong ... he wanted to be an artist so because his father wanted something else he just did nothing in school and concentraded on his drawing... just because he stopped drawing doesnt mean he didnt go far it simply means that maybe he didnt have the chance or the lust for it ... or maybe he just wanted to free his countries from the disaster that was raining in over the countries... he did not brainwash people, people believed in him and those who didnt just followed orders... there was no brainwashing lol... and what do you mean by the hate kept growing ? lol if people would have let them finished the job then there wouldnt be nothing to hate would there ? god read up on stuff before you send in stuff like this...

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Thank you for your comment but i am well aware that he was a very intelegant man who was indeed a painter and also he was manipulative. And there was hate. He hated the jews for no good reason! And he did brainwash. He MADE people believe! Don't be an idiot i did this for history class and i wrote 3 essays on hitler's life. And tell me this. Was his artwork actually succesfull in his time? No. I know he didn't fail uni, if you haven't noticed it rhymes i would love to see you write a rhyme on a Crule dictator and then make sure you send it to me.

And as i can see you probably aren't a fan of the jewish community. If you are a Nazi then i should probably report your comment and make sure you don't come back on this site.

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im not a nazi :) but christ you cant say stuff like: "Was his artwork actually succesfull in his time? No." because many of the most famous artists didnt become famous before many years after they died .. so that point sort of sucks + just because you have written 3 essays on his life doesnt mean they were any good ? and dont care if it rhymes it shouldnt contain the wrong information ..
and that last thing is that a threat lol ?

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I like it.

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My great aunt was a part of the Hitler Youth, and I can tell you that he and his Nazis did indeed do some brainwashin'. :)

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*by "he" I mean Hitler. Not my great aunt. :XD:

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love it. but Hitler was in jail for 9 months not three. just wanted to let u know.

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